Myself and Krista have created a group storyboard in order to understand what we needed to do when producing our film. Creating the storyboard will allow us to stay on track when filming so that we don't fall behind. It will also help us not to get confused when we are in the filming process and can understand each frame well. We have included different frames from each other's storyboards so that the creativity was extended and varied, having just one persons ideas would be boring and would only allow that person to understand fully what they are doing. Having two people's ideas within is easier as each person can explain what they mean and it will allow the film to go smoother when being created.

Again, Krista's ideas were mostly used for the narrative in this part, however, my ideas were used when i explained in my storyboard that the hitman should be given money and an address note. The first frame hadn't even been created within my storyboard as i had started my second one showing the antagonist paying the hitman then the hitman agrees to kill the woman. We went with krista's idea because we both believe that it will grip the audience more if we add on more detailed frames. I noticed that myself and Krista's storyboards were the same for the lighting category as we had both chosen to use low key lighting.

When looking at storyboard page number 4, my idea of having POV as a camera angle was used because it would show the audience where he is. Mine and Kristas were both similar one frame number 13 as i had said that i would like sinister music to be played, Krista's idea was to have the music building up slowly, so we incorporated both of our ideas. Within frames 14 and 15, Krista's camera shot ideas were used as they made more sense to the story and the audience. We had both decided to use low key lighting within our storyboard as it is approaching a dark scene. The editing ideas were Krista's as i didn't write any down because i had no ideas for that category.

Krista's narrative idea was used within frame 17 as it shows the aggressiveness of the hitman within this scene. My idea was for the hitman to hold the knife high in the air. The use of screaming as a sound was included within both of our storyboards as it is necessary to show the fear and emotions of the female victim. Krista's idea for shallow focus was used for frame number 19 as it allows the audience to focus on the dead body, this shows the state of the female victim.
Overall, i think our storyboard is strong as it incorporates both of our ideas. We are both stronger at different categories, therefore making it easier for us to agree on which elements we should include in each frame. There is nothing i would change within the group storyboard as myself and Krista both got our ideas across and each person managed to state why the elements they chose should be used and so it was easier for each person to agree with what would look better.
You have provided a sound analysis of your group’s storyboard, explaining what your sequence will consist of with regards to the order and sequence itself; however, you have not specifically given examples of micro-elements used at different stages to help support points made or referred to inspirations.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Provide a PEER analysis of the micro-elements used from each of your individual storyboards, explaining why you have chosen these specific elements, what they create and WHY, how a relationship can be built and WHY they are conventional of the genre.
2) Say what thrillers you have taken inspirations from as a group and why - where is this evident in your storyboard?
3) Double check SPAG